You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:-
1. Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery.
2. Explain the importance of this delivery.
3. Ask for a replacement item to be sent.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention that I recently ordered a pair of shoes from your online store and I found something missing which is a very important requirement.
Last week on Saturday night I placed an order for a pair of Nike Airmax shoes under your online flagship sale of flat 50%. However, it was delivered yesterday at my house address when I was away and after checking them I noticed that the shoe was dispatched without having shoelaces and I have also attached a picture for your reference.
It was quite disappointing, as I order them for my brother who is turning 18 a day after tomorrow and I ordered shoes well in advance so that I must receive them before his special day comes. However, because of this incomplete shipment from your side, I won’t be able to surprise my brother with his favorite shoes out of all.
Would you kindly check with your supplier and send me the replacement as soon as possible and if I have to drop this incomplete package to any courier service in my locality just to speed up the delivery process, I would love to help you with that.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Karan Gulati
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| 2021-10-16 | mohammed123 | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53483531796 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4072409111 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266141255983 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109937151136 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367508452258 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139873288169 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395946320469 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.