There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........,
You should write at least 150 words.
DEAR Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the consistency of ongoing bus service in Erin Mills area of Mississauga city. The buses are not arriving on time as scheduled and most of the buses are heavily crowded.
I regret to inform you that your service is below my expectations as I usually get late at work , As a result my everyday routine is getting disturbed. Moreover, due to delayed arrivals most of the buses comes heavily crowded and sometimes you have to wait for another one to reach your destination easily by having seat availability.
I trust that you will give this matter your urgent consideration and look forward to receiving any suggestions you might have to overcome this problem.
Thanking You in Anticipation.
Yours Sincerely karan Gulati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pectations as I usually get late at work , As a result my everyday routine is gett...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buses'' or 'bus's'?
Suggestion: buses'; bus's
...er, due to delayed arrivals most of the buses comes heavily crowded and sometimes you...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... You in Anticipation. Yours Sincerely karan Gulati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9560529517 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5050046206 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151475265528 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589473964856 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045056322889 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072591730941 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385709819747 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.