You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took
place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that
they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served
for lunch.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to our meeting, which has been organised by our company at your hotel last Wednesday.
Firstly, I must say that the participants were satisfied with the service, which was provided. For example, microphones have a high quality, as well as speakers, that allowed every guest to hear every word, which was spoken.
Secondly, many visitors were disappointed and complained about the quality of meals and beverages.
Food consists of a significant amount of salt, and also some were overburnt, and some were spoiled. Moreover, some of the guests have allergies, and there were no alternatives to swap dishes on which were suitable for them.
Lastly, I would like to give you advice on this issue with food. You should hire more competent culinarians plus look at your equipment for cooking, because of some it could need a repair or should to be replaced by new ones.
Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Mike Wattie
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
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- Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy with everything organized and in the correct place 71
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...burnt, and some were spoiled. Moreover, some of the guests have allergies, and there were n...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ention to this matter. Yours sincerely, Mike Wattie
^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... matter. Yours sincerely, Mike Wattie
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60380404267 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7200206612 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 4.34317383033 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233624900265 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834326457062 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240090901615 0.0603063233224 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103342334875 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223595459805 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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