Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people suggest that unpaid works for community need to be included in secondary school programs. I totally agree with this opinion because an experience of any action, such as work for charities organization or teaching juveniles to athletic, gives them opportunities in their future lives. This essay will discuss the issue using examples and demonstrate points.
The main reason why I believe that practice of work for charity useful for students of high school is practice and receiving experience for the future. An exercise of charity work can help them assess prospective ways for choosing their distant place of employment. For example, working for the Red Cross as a volunteer can define their occupation as a doctor or a nurse. Therefore, it is apparent that spending time on work for charity is a worthwhile investment for deciding of their career.
Also, students can get some skills in tutoring if they will learn juveniles to sport or athletic. An education might give them skills of understanding youngsters and their behavior. For instance, an insight of children behavior might represent them problems in their characteristics and a way to solve them. Consequently, it is doubtless you can get a comprehension of manner human being, which will be an advantage in comparison with other students.
In conclusion, I agree entirely that unpaid work for charity should be involved in a high school course due to the fact that experience and practice will assist to make fewer mistakes and receive a more complete the picture of the world. Given this situation, it seems that students of high school should get more experience work as more as they can.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...should get more experience work as more as they can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08363636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8388101337 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6233204014 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151200708933 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602084448606 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388847232317 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948565132998 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220120491757 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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