Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
Many human beings believe that it is critical to keep your home and workplace neat, and everything should be systematized and placed in the right spots. I totally agree with this opinion, because neatness can influence your mood and the organized place of work might help in the processes of work.
The main reason why tidiness is essential is that it can affect people's behavior and mood. Various events and accidents may change an individual condition, but you will feel appeasement and relaxation if you have a comfortable and tidy house. The friends and visitors your home will also have a favorable impression if they see how many efforts and diligence were put into tidying up the house. According to a recent survey, people with a positive attitude have more chances to be successful in their work and life. Furthermore, a tidy house is more simple to support in cleanness than a dirty one so that it can save more time, which could be spent with your necessity and family.
Also, the order at your workplace can assist you to be more effective and productive. When things and instruments are placed in order employee will spend less time searching them. Moreover, if tools are on the floor, workers can stumble and get an injury or a wound. Further, many companies have a system of fines, and a worker can be punished if implementations are not in order.
In conclusion, I believe that it is essential to keep most things organized and in the correct place because the organization makes it easy to find them.
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions are not in order. In conclusion, I believe that it is essential to keep m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76136363636 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64930373149 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4684388607 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25064643156 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853608485866 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759177589826 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162266772113 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828515752954 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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