The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with a concern about the local rubbish system and want to convey that it is not working correctly.
First, the trash bins are overloaded, so smell spread around the location. Also, this situation attracts many homeless dogs, rats, birds, and cats. Moreover, they are taking out the trash, which makes things worse.
Secondly, our neighborhood is not delighted about this situation and the land, on which are our houses, lost in the price and attraction. Furthermore, the dogs consistently try to attack people and their domestic animals, together with this the dogs bit some children, when they attempted to play with them.
Lastly, we suppose your company to solve this problem in the shortest time and suggest some possible solutions. Firstly, you need to buy more garbage trucks and hire more workers for collecting waste. Second, you should invite the Animal Control Service to catch all vagabond animals and the Pest Control Service for the rats and insects.
Thank you in advance for time for this matter, and I am looking forward to cooperating about this situation.
Yours sincerely,
Valefar
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12169312169 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44394048723 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687830687831 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2674940166 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280710747778 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870978339588 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716419001314 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130776891423 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866732112562 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.