In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
The modern world has many technologies in the production of food and agricultural but in spite of that many human beings around the world do not have enough food for their subsistence. This essay discusses why this situation happened and what can be done to resolve the problem by demonstrating decisions and examples.
The main reason why a lot of people are so far starving is that food is not free and the locations of growing crops determined. Food is produced by mega-corporations which invest much money in researching agriculture, and they do not have a mood to hand out food for everyone because their primary goal is gaining profit, not a charity.
Therefore, poor people cannot afford to buy food every day because they need money to get food and undergo the necessity of food. Another reason why people do not have access to food is that of their location. Also, the atmosphere of people habitat can be extremely cold or hot and in such places is very unlikely to have a way to get a lot of food without significant expenses.
Several steps can be done to solve this problem with food for needy people. First, the government can give subsidies to the penniless an example of this can be observed in the USA, therein people with revenue less than a certain amount of money can get food stamps, which they can swap in shops for food. Second, in places where no shops the government can supply places with food, for example, you know organizations like the Red Cross, which provide food to African people.
In conclusion, the problem of food in today world is keen, and many people of the earth have a high demand for provision. However, there are lots of possibilities to improve the situation of famine and support people in a moment of necessity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70322580645 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438226137 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3814083323 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108262833177 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518860859479 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062023876061 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818870937409 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555964504711 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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