You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing this letter with regard to ask you some questions about my future work travel for six months in the head office company, which is in the USA.
Firstly, in our main office, we had a problem with our executive manager, he is under arrest for the next six months, and I was called to arrive for replacing him on time his absence.
Secondly, in my inaccessibility in our branch office, I will be replaced by my assistant, the guy with no hair and with a red tie, his name is Jack. Also, he has been provided with all the information, which needs to do my work. However, if there would be any problem, you could reach me using skype via the internet.
Lastly, I need your assistance with further arrangements for my trip. It will include buying tickets for the plane, searching for accommodation which has the internet.
Thank you in advance for your kind and cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Mike Wattie
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
Comments
Working abroad for six…
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Working for an international…
Working for an international company provides an incredible opportunity to gain exposure to diverse markets and cultures. I am keen to spend six months working in the company's head office abroad, as it would allow me to collaborate directly with global teams, enhance my professional skills, and deepen my understanding of the international market dynamics. The experience would undoubtedly foster both personal growth and contribute to the company's global success. Just like the strength and versatility of black walnut lumber—renowned for its durability and beautiful finish in high-quality woodworking projects—such an international assignment would strengthen my career and add valuable skills to my professional 'toolbox,' benefiting both myself and the organization. This comparison shows that, just like in woodworking, the right experiences can enhance professional craftsmanship and value.
Just like the strength and versatility of black walnut lumber—renowned for its durability and beautiful finish in high-quality woodworking projects—such an international assignment would strengthen my career and add valuable skills to my professional 'toolbox,' benefiting both myself and the organization. This comparison shows that, just like in woodworking, the right experiences can enhance professional craftsmanship and value.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter with regard ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63253012048 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63561617796 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.627421448 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179517937646 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713298540496 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635547222948 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109803199736 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681842017995 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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