Dear Sir,
My name is James Allen and I am writing this letter to give my feedback on your recent stay at your hotel. To be more precise, we received your hospitality on October 6th for our organization’s daylong meeting.
To begin with, I would like to reiterate what our guests most liked about your hotel. The welcome at the reception was very warm. Everyone loved the ambience and conference space provided for the meeting. Staff personnel were very attentive to everyone’s requests and they outdid themselves in providing exceptional service.
On the contrary, our participants were not very delighted about the food. To state the few reasons, food was cold, and menu was not correct. We specifically requested vegan dishes for few of our friends but there was no provision of that. Moreover, when requested, head chef denied making arrangements and was not helpful.
Finally, since we have been giving our business to you for many years and we trust in your brand, I would like to suggest few ideas which might be helpful to improve the quality of food. First of all, you should provide proper training on food preparation to your cafeteria staff. In addition, you should also talk to your chef about honoring the last minute request as it only gives an opportunity to your staff to test their caliber and provide top notched service.
I hope if you can look into this matter and also improve your services so that we continue to enjoy your hospitality in the future.
Sincerely,
James Allen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92996108949 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60481934142 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8755816676 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283580238079 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847105719402 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426645993012 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144600806187 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493260815572 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.