In many regions of the United Sates of America, youngsters below the age of 20 are prohibited from wandering outside after certain time past sunset if they are not being safeguarded by any adult. Higher authorities take such strong position based on atrocities of the behavioral pattern of kids and for their own safety. This essay will discuss about the possible reasons behind this proposition before making a standpoint.
Expounding on first and foremost motive behind this is that, government only impose such harsh restrictions when there is a serious threat to someone’s life. Teenagers tend to be inexperienced about such situation and they might become the victim of the brutality. For example, recently a boy from middle school got shot at night since he accidently ended up in restricted area where criminals were active in shooting. Such incident could have been prevented if he was accompanied by someone older.
Pondering on the second school of thought, at this outset of millennium, many school kids are obsessed with social media. If they see any opportunity of making exclusive viral content, they do not hesitate to put their lives in danger. For instance, my neighbor’s son, Aron, once walked in curfew hit region to make YouTube video only to be beaten up by local gangs. Adults not only can guide them in rough time but also can guard them from anything bad happening to them.
To recapitulate, it is quite conspicuous form the above presented information that, government should restrict teenagers from going out at night in curfew hit area without a company of an adult. The budding age and adrenalin hit emotions can lead them to fall prey of crime. They should only grant permission to wander if they are in the safe hands of their guardians.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00336700337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66188395376 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2089316978 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215188603412 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624044850527 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479102727652 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122755295963 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250583607765 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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