You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they like the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
• Say what the participants like about the hotel
• explain why they were unhappy about the food
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter in connection to the last meeting of my company which was organised by me in your prestigious hotel. It was organised for around 40 people who gave their feedback on the scale from worst to best.
Firstly, most of them highly rated that it was spacious and surroundings were hygienic, as they took care of current ongoing pandemic disease. All staff members were well-dressed since they were wearing masks and gloves appropriately. Secondly, all employees loved the architecture of hotel because they were fascinated by ample of parking space available in front of the hotel.
However, unfortunately, while all of them made complaints about food stuff that was served on that day. First of all, they served food very late and most of the items were cooked stale, even the fried rice with chicken was over cooked. Apart from it, most of the cuisines were not available at the moment but were listed in the Menu.
Overall I would like to suggest you should try to improve food quality and provide variety of dishes that should be served on time.
I hope you will look into this matter that will certainly make a difference to your hotel status.
Yours Sincerely,
Ravinder Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...pace available in front of the hotel However unfortunately while all of them made co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, well, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81339712919 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39439146877 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 209.0 16.3608247423 1277% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1006.0 76.5299724578 1315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 209.0 16.8248392259 1242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 4.34317383033 2187% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390186076787 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.390186076787 0.0766984524023 509% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163801941398 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070987572836 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.7 8.37731958763 1262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -132.2 70.7449484536 -187% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 7.45979381443 1121% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.55 7.59969072165 231% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 85.6 8.54432989691 1002% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 8.15463917526 699% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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