You recently received furniture that was already damaged at the time of arrival. Write a letter to the manager of the shipping company about it and say
– What furniture did you order?
– What was the damage?
– Suggest what needs to be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Catherine Smith. I want to make a complaint about the delivery of order # 123456.
I purchased a set of chairs and a kitchen table from IKEA store yesterday. The table cover is made of glass so I asked a consultant at the store to mark the package accordingly to notify loaders about fragile object during loading and shipping.
However, I was very disappointed to see that upon arrival the cover of the table was shattered. Moreover one of the chairs’ legs was broken.
I’d like to require a compensation for the damaged items in the amount of 500 USD from your company as conditions of the delivery agreement were not fulfilled. Confirmation of the cost of the broken furniture by the store can be sent if requested.
I would be grateful if this matter could be resolved as soon as possible because. Please contact me by my mobile +123456789 for further details.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Catherine Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...l the cover of the table was shattered. Moreover one of the chairs' legs was broken...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e damaged items in the amount of 500 USD from your company as conditions of the d...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e contact me by my mobile +123456789 for further details. Looking forward to hea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85798816568 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79074719317 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8280638782 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150803052599 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455357773174 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350926300621 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687321418872 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253081999449 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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