You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she/he should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Dave,
Trust you are doing great. I just received your post via Fedex.From your mail, I understand you are confused between taking up a course on carpentry at a local community college versus taking an apprenticeship at Mr Woody Store in your town.
Knowing your interest in wood carving and furniture making, I believe, instead of wasting crucial time pursuing vocational courses at the college you could start interning at the furniture store. Working in the carpentry section of the shop floor will give you a practical experience on how a wooden log is converted into unique and marvellous pieces of home accessories. Since the shop is located in your town, you will save time and money travelling for learning these new skills. This option will also help your family to ease the financial burden. You can try working as a Carpenter and get hands on experience in the field or even can consider working as a Salesman trying to gauge new furniture trends in the market.
Do let me know on what you decide. I am sure you will make an appropriate decision. Give my love to Aunt Rachel.
Best regards,
Lee
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...at. I just received your post via Fedex.From your mail, I understand you are confuse...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Knowing
...ip at Mr Woody Store in your town. knowing your interest in wood carving and furni...
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Line 17, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to Aunt Rachel. Best regards, Lee
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93193717277 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68252959404 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.161870882 44.8134815571 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145208614287 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541837705339 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325032924514 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928159240756 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247028904189 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.