You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
- Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Anna,
I’m writing in reply to your letter asking for advice about your choice for going to the university or finding a job.
In my opinion, It’s difficult for you to continue studying because the tuition fee for four years at college is expensive. Not to mention, you have to pay for living expenses. Furthermore, the curriculum is full of theory and lacks practical activities so you will lack skills and hand on experiences.
However, if you get a job, you will make a living and take care of yourself. You can also gain a lot of real-life experience to learn how to deal with problem stress. Besides, you can widen our relationship with people who have a lot of experience and many successes in their life.
I know that you are a careful person, so you should work as a cashier at a coffee shop, a clothes store or a supermarket. So if you like, I strongly recommend that you can apply for a coffee shop. The café is cozy with a green space near my house.
I would very much like to know if this was helpful.
Best friend,
Tram.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45595854922 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52976057805 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7595169928 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259978168054 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879079015628 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734035686948 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136102132166 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901357210542 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.