You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear___,
Dear Manoj,
I hope you are doing well. I am glad to get your letter seeking advice on going further university or doing job. Firstly, i would like to congratulate you on passing your diploma. In my opinion, you will not enjoy your further college life because of the financial burden. The university fees are very expensive for international student like us. Furthermore, living cost, groceries, extra expenses of college are very high as well. Moreover, lacking practical knowledge you have to struggle to find job after getting degree and start from lower level.
I highly suggest you to try to get job on the field you are really into. As i know, you are very good at computer skills, especially graphic designing. While doing job, you can excel your knowledge, gain real time experiences which help you to deal with stress management at work.
Hope my advice will help you to choose correct path.
Have a nice day.
Your faithfully
asmita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Manoj, I hope you are doing well. I am glad to g...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...anoj, I hope you are doing well. I am glad to get your letter seeking advi...
^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... glad to get your letter seeking advice on going further university or doing job. Firstl...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...rther university or doing job. Firstly, i would like to congratulate you on passi...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...gree and start from lower level. I highly suggest you to try to get job on...
^
Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ob on the field you are really into. As i know, you are very good at computer ski...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53162439652 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1695117308 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1538461538 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29279234181 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975842102996 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731105413135 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185177003617 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668546257438 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.