you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
write a letter to this friend. In your letter
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John,
Hope you're doing fine, I received your letter asking me if you should go to college or get a job. Well, I am writing to inform you that i think you should get a job instead.
It is good to go to college and graduate with a certificate. However, graduation after college doesn't guaranty that you will get a job. To get jobs these days is very competitive, why waste four or three years of your life attending college classes that are strenuous and boring, when you can use these years to search for a job. Furthermore, going to college is expensive as one will have to pay tuition fee and other charges.
getting a job is the deal my friend. you will be receiving salary to take care of your personal needs; liking paying your house rent, utility bills, gas bills and other expenses. In addition to this, you can amass an enormous amount of experience which would be beneficial to you in the future.
With your computer knowledge, jobs like computer operator, office administrative officer and even typist would be a great.
Best Regards
Sophie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John, Hope youre doing fine, I received your letter aski...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Well, I am writing to inform you that i think you should get a job instead. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...cate. However, graduation after college doesnt guaranty that you will get a job. To ge...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Getting
...o pay tuition fee and other charges. getting a job is the deal my friend. you will b...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... getting a job is the deal my friend. you will be receiving salary to take care o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68783068783 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50560246803 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6952490195 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391234273149 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145419898766 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971296880539 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228675182246 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122426516474 0.0580467560999 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.