Dear Sarah,
I received your letter on seeking advice on your choice between going to college and trying a job. I would like to share my thoughts with you on this regard.
Based on what I read, you seemed to be confused on what major to choose if you want to go to college. With this confusion prevailing, I would suggest you trying a job for now. By choosing college with this state of mind, you might not be able to focus on studies and might not give the due attention it needs. If you take up a job now, it will give you the time to find out what you really want to pursue as your career.
Additionally it will also help you in gaining some exposure to the domain you wish to choose later on. As you know, today’s world is very competitive and many companies wish their employees have hands on experience along with the knowledge through books. Also, with the work experience that you would gain, you will be able to correlate it well with your studies later on.
As you had mentioned that you wish to pursue something in medicine and your interest in sports, I would suggest you take up some profiles as a first aid care provider in a sports center. Through this, you will understand the needs of sports person and since you are a certified first aid professional, you will also recognize the medical needs.
Hope you take your time to realize your needs and interests. Wishing you the very best in your choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... really want to pursue as your career. Additionally it will also help you in gaining some e...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will also recognize the medical needs. Hope you take your time to realize your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43346007605 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33378318873 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2412443639 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255796575048 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116681194734 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642163846743 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173759530026 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838348117696 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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