Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
it is often argued that social media has a does not have a positive impact all over in spite of it being helpful in many ways. this essay agrees that social media has negative influences because of the longer hours spent in these sites thereby wasting precious hours and due the vast spread of falsified information.
In today’s world, almost everyone uses social media such as Facebook. Firstly, the usage of these sites have become so addictive that individuals spend long hours in accessing it. users spend time in sharing and receiving updates from their friends. these virtual friends have slowly replaced the time spent with the family thereby losing valuable that could have been spent in doing some other activities. this has also resulted in the sedentary life style for many. In a recent survey done, it was found that an average user spends around 4 hrs. on a single day on social media and are left with no time for their family or any other self-improvement activities.
Secondly, the content shared in social media spreads really fast across the globe. Once shared, there is no control on the information being spread. While it is good for useful contents, others can lead to misinterpretation of information thereby causing confusion among the readers. it might lead to taking action without proper evidence, thus forming a potential danger to the society. it is for this reason government places a ban on social media during natural or man-made disaster. For example, in the recent bomb blast in Sri Lanka, the government had imposed a ban on social media till situation returned to normalcy.
To conclude, social media has more negative impacts on the society owing to the usage of it by the individuals. The long duration of time spent and the unrestricted sharing of content in the social media creates a negative influence on the individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6183612531 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4758076755 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3529411765 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174072318021 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519340013835 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045016605607 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11023197596 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349549060501 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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