Many people believe that social network sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, social network sites play a key role in peoples life. According to some, this has a detrimental effect on individuals and society, as, they argue, that this is a huge waste of time and can lead to cyberbullying. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that social media doesn’t only affect negatively, as people can keep in touch with their friends and relatives and gain large access to the latest news.
social network sites such as facebook and Skype greatly help people to communicate with their loved ones who are far from them. These days, almost everyone has a friend or a family member who loves in other countries. Since phone calls are extremely expensive, people use the internet to talk with their loved ones. For instance, I have several friends outside of my country, and facebook enables me to have daily chats with them, see their recent activities and pictures. this certainly makes me feel closer to them. Thus, with the help of social network distance barriers with relieves might be overcomed more easily.
Another significant benefit of social media is that people are able to be better informed about what is happening in the world. Currently, technology and science are developing at a rapid speed. Therefore, in order to succeed in the workplace, people need to keep up with the latest information. they can get numerous information and data via social networks. For example, there are various professional groups on facebook where people share their experience with others all over the world. Hence, social networks might be beneficial for professional purposes as well.
In conclusion, it was shown that social network sites have a significant impact on having long-distance relationships and keeping up with recent information. Though some believe that social networks are a threat to both individuals and society, still, in my opinion, the advantages of social networks far overweigh any drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18404907975 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70323206281 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6977503784 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263879957487 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770430694609 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686840395238 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170216578524 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676530002891 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.