One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion.
· What do you think the causes are?
· What solutions can you suggest?
In modern life, traffic jams are one of the main issues in megapolises, since people encounter this problem on their daily routine. this is mainly because of the increasing number of cars and centralization of the cities. this essay will also discuss several solutions such are encouraging people to use public transportation and relocating some institutions in suburbs.
Firstly, the reason for most traffic congestions is the growing number of private cars. Statistics show that the population of large urban areas is growing at a rapid speed. In addition, currently, many families prefer to have more than one car. Secondly, the majority of the business offices, educational centres and hospitals are situated in city centres. Therefore, this makes it almost impossible to avoid long traffic jams in pick hours, as people rush to work and schools. Respectively, these causes lead to more and more vehicles on roads every day.
There are various effective solutions to decrease traffic congestion. one way to tackle this is to promote public transportation. The government should improve the quality of mass transit services by adding more advanced buses and trains and reducing the cost of transport facilities, as this might significantly reduce traffic jams. Another way of solving this problem is to replace part of the working and school buildings from downtown to outskirts. By doing this, the authorities should be able to ease traffic congestions during pick hours.
In conclusion, it was shown that the rising volume of private cars and numerous institutions in the city centre are the key causes of traffic congestions. using public transport and moving these buildings to suburbs were suggested to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33454545455 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84700567655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6450457088 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156385778474 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504297919976 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351239862439 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909619708788 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178377138013 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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