Some people that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people have more alternatives when it comes to university subjects. According to some, students should have an opportunity to choose what they would like to study, as they will not only enjoy studying but also will do better if they are interested in the subject. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that, even though many don’t agree, students need to concentrate on subjects that will later be helpful in their future job, since they will have more time to gain profound knowledge about their profession and will be highly competitive in the job market.
university students ought to learn only professional subjects, as this way more time can be left for studying useful materials and students can have a successful career. it is obvious that everyone is facing the issue of time management during university life. studying subjects that are only satisfying might be time-consuming. For instance, during my medical studies, I only had time to master my study materials, and being engaged in any other activities distracted my schedule. Moreover, by having mandatory classes at universities, one will be able to have a clear idea about her future tasks during work. Therefore, it will be easier to integrate into the job after graduation.
On the other hand, others believe that students need to have options to study what they like.
Firstly, studies are not only about responsibility, one should take pleasure while learning something. this will encourage students to study more properly. Secondly, students apply themselves more when they enjoy learning. many studies have shown that students get high grades from their elective subjects.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that universities should emphasize academic subjects, as students can have enough time to learn them thoroughly and have a prosperous career. though some argue that students should be allowed to learn their preferred subjects, since that can be fulfilled from studying and perform academically well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...studying and perform academically well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37308868502 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76348726122 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.030810058 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383284592602 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136096452441 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764397752491 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236467644298 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502451803856 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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