One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
In recent times, virtually large cities all over the world are challenging an increasingly congested disaster. There are various reasons for this matter, and some remedies can be carried out to enhance the terrible situation.
One reason that can be given to explain the traffic jam is that more and more people are traveling by cars instead of bikes or buses. Increased wages made it easier for people to buy their own cars, which has led to the growing number of automobiles on the roads and resulted in “one long parking land”. Furthermore, the poor condition and service of public transport should be considered. According to a survey in 2021, public buses in Hanoi only meet less than one-tenth of citizens’ demand in terms of travel times, convenience, availability and punctuality; therefore, people tend to use private vehicles to save their time. The more vehicles moving on the road, the easier it is to get stuck.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems. Firstly, a solution would be to introduce bans on motor vehicles of varying degrees of severity. For instance, during the 1990s, Boston faced a congested nuisance on the highway; after closing its exit and planting trees along the route, local officials have turned this place into a tourist attraction park. This revolution could precipitate a grand experiment, to show how a city with fewer cars can reinvent itself. A second measure would be for governments to promote and provide much better public transportation and charge prices that are affordable for everyone. Consequently, people might choose to commute on a convenient and comfortable bus or metro during rush hours, which lead to uncongested and unpolluted roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16254416961 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77254363617 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657243816254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0454231544 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921995792638 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294223179326 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310535241753 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646753043952 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166965407129 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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