you recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
write a letter to this friend. in your letter:\say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
expalin why getting a job is a good idea
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him /her.
DEAR JOHN,
HOPE YOU ARE DOING GOOD IN YOUR LIFE AND EVERYONE IN YOUR FAMILY IS WELL. I GOT YOUR MESSAGE ABOUT YOUR CONFUSION AND I AM HAPPY TO HELP.
ACCORDING TO MY EXPERIENCE, YOU SHOULD GO FOR A JOB. BEFORE GOING TO COLLEGE YOU MUST EXPOSE YOUR SELF IN THE JOB MARKET WHICH WILL HELP YOU TO CHOOSE BETTER COURSE FOR COLLEGE STUDY. COLLEGE WILL BE LESS ENJOYABLE WITHOUT KNOWING ANYTHING PRACTICAL ABOUT WHAT YOU REALLY LOVE TO DO.
I ALWAYS FOUND YOU HAVING KEEN INTEREST IN ORGANISING EVENTS,SO YOU CAN OPT FOR A JOB IN EVENT ORGANISING INDUSTRY, ALSO, YOU LIKE TO COOK AND TRY OUT NEW RECIPES, YOU CAN THINK OF JOINING SOME HOTEL OR RESTUARANT TO LEARN AND OBSERVE EXPERIENCED CHEFS.
I WOULD SUGGEST TO EXPLORE THE OPTIONS AND CHOOSE THE BEST SATISFYING CHOICE FOR CAREER AND EXCEL FURTHER IN THE FIELD BY STUDYING FURTHER. HOPE, I HAVE BEEN OF SOME HELP. ALL THE BEST AND SEE YOU SOON.
YOURS LOVINGLY
SAM 17 SEPTEMBER 2018
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: To better; To well
...OB MARKET WHICH WILL HELP YOU TO CHOOSE BETTER COURSE FOR COLLEGE STUDY. COLLEGE WILL ...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , SO
...AVING KEEN INTEREST IN ORGANISING EVENTS,SO YOU CAN OPT FOR A JOB IN EVENT ORGANISI...
^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'SUGGEST exploring'.
Suggestion: SUGGEST exploring
...D OBSERVE EXPERIENCED CHEFS. I WOULD SUGGEST TO EXPLORE THE OPTIONS AND CHOOSE THE BEST SATISFY...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...AND SEE YOU SOON. YOURS LOVINGLY SAM 17 SEPTEMBER 2018
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28477468721 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.126722626 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277573768097 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106933033139 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717478889979 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12296613047 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924002376173 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.