You recently sent some documents by post but they did not arrive Write a letter to the post manager In your letter Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take

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You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive.
Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter
- Give details of the situation
- Describe the documents
- Say what action you want the post office to take.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to let you know that my documents that has not reached the destination, it is overdue by 12 days.
My document was collected by DHL Courier staff on the 12th of March 2022 from Toronto. The 10-digit code of my tracking number is E987645120. Your website tracking system shows my package was picked-up, arrived at Toronto sorting facility on the 12th and departed on the 13th of March. However, the last update depicts that it has reached the Boston sorting facility on the 14th and no update thereafter.
The documents inside the packaging were important property papers and power of attorney from my lawyer’s office (DC Law), 16 pages in total.
I would like to request you to kindly retrieve the packaging and return it to me at the earliest as it is expensive to get a new POA done again.
I am hoping to hear a positive update on the retrieval of my parcel.
Yours sincerely,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that my doc...
^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etrieval of my parcel. Yours sincerely,
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61932135934 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3128156554 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980219407393 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409106890659 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359329605791 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054205152277 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430247779244 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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