You recently started work in a new company
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
-explain why you changed job
-describe your new job
-tell him/her your other news
Dear Chris,
I'm excited to tell you about my new job which I just started a few days ago.
My previous company has shifted its operations to the UK and I was not ready to move there so I resigned. Luckily, I got a better job offer from a competitor with a tempting salary package and a few perks. I accepted the offer as there are more chances to advance in a career here.
My new position as head of finance is a dream come true for me. I am leading a diversified talented team of accounts and treasury. My duties require me to work as a bridge between all the different departments. The best part is, I got to travel a lot to other cities for the audit of other branches.
I am over the moon to tell you about this exciting news that next week I am scheduled to travel to your city for work. Fortunately, I will have a lot of spare time to spend it with you. I wanted to give you a heads up so you will keep yourself free on the 28th of June.
Can't wait to see you!
Best wishes,
Ahsan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Chris, Im excited to tell you about my new job wh...
^^
Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'head'
Suggestion: head
...end it with you. I wanted to give you a heads up so you will keep yourself free on th...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...p yourself free on the 28th of June. Cant wait to see you! Best wishes, Ahsan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11616161616 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34278661372 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4272145885 44.8134815571 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207120148671 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604815608018 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579845849539 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110843117692 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675879703664 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.