You recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
-Describe tour new job
-tellhim/her your other news
Hi John,
It's been so long. How have you been doing recently? By the way, I wish to tell you that I have switched to another project.
You already know I had been with a team of consultants in a project called Urban Remodelling Program for last 5 years. But, recently the management of the program had gone worse. Can you imagine working in a construction sector with no stationery at your work place? Of course, that doesn't happen anywhere else. What's more, the two vehicles being used for the works also broke down, and we were left with no means for logistics supply and for visiting sites. Being fed up with their arrangements, I decided to go.
The new office is well-managed though. also, our boss is quite friendly and seems to cater for everyone's individual needs. They are also giving better pay and bonus for those who perform well on the given tasks. I am glad I don't have to struggle with poor facilities anymore. I would also like to tell you that my wife has also landed a new job. She got appointed as a HR manager recently. so, that makes us doubly happy.
How about you? Make sure you write soon!
Take care
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ery at your work place? Of course, that doesnt happen anywhere else. Whats more, the t...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...urse, that doesnt happen anywhere else. Whats more, the two vehicles being used for t...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... The new office is well-managed though. also, our boss is quite friendly and seems t...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rm well on the given tasks. I am glad I dont have to struggle with poor facilities a...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...got appointed as a HR manager recently. so, that makes us doubly happy. How ab...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “so , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...got appointed as a HR manager recently. so, that makes us doubly happy. How about yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, of course, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50961538462 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35755426877 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716346153846 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4503894858 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1111111111 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155882186193 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471307587639 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526025851685 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097341639748 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128031901036 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.69 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.