You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city.
The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint regarding the pathetic services of your hotel which I experienced last Saturday. While booking your hotel, you promised to endow me acme quality services but you had made false promise as your heating system was not working efficiently.
When I realized about the default of your system, I immediately called your staff but they were unable to remove this glitch. Undoubtedly, the weather was so harsh on that day, therefore I had to order for more quilts to get rid of extreme cold but all
in vain. Consequently, I fall ill and became the prey of viral infection.
It would be highly appreciable if you repair our heating system and arrange a standby system to combat with such uncertain conditions Lastly, it would be grateful if you oblige me with some refund as i had to suffer a lot due to the mistake of your employees.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: A
...uri, dweller of Huston Street Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s but you had made false promise as your heating system was not working efficient...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecame the prey of viral infection. It would be highly appreciable if you repai...
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Line 8, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould be highly appreciable if you repair our heating system and arrange a standby...
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Line 8, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ful if you oblige me with some refund as i had to suffer a lot due to the mistake...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l if you oblige me with some refund as i had to suffer a lot due to the mistake ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, lastly, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78770949721 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56656338107 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703910614525 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4208264939 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198397123372 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715238652603 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558450866272 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804454737313 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647282812679 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.