In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst
younger generations.
Why is this happening?
Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
Undoubtedly, there is an escalated trend of used outfits among youngsters. Even though wide spread unemployment force them to buy second hand attires as new ones are quite expensive for them , still I cogitate that this an impeccable development as this vogue is protecting the universe by putting a bar on the carbon footprints.
Since dynamic business conditions and prevailing turmoil in the politics gives rise to untoward economics conditions, thus youth have to face unemployment. Seemingly, the lack of employ-ability causes to the paucity of fund among youth and new trendy clothes are highly costly owing to which they rely on used apparels. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact documented by New York Times that job instability in India compel the young people to purchase second hand clothes from stores. Hence, ever changing fashion and financial constraint push the young ones towards used dresses.
To continue, burgeoning in the demands of used outfits is conserving the atmosphere from devastation by trimmed down down the carbon emission. New attires require huge amount of fresh water, lethal dying chemicals, paper to cover it and colossal amounts of non-renewable resource to produce and transport it. Thus, the prevailing shift in trend would reduce the carbon emission and protect the nature from ravage. To exemplify, as per the report published by Canadian Government, in the gone calendar year, elevated demand of second-hand clothes in all over the Canada has cut down the carbon emission of Textile Industries by 30 percent. Therefore, preserving the nature from insane carbon emission is making this trend a positive development.
In conclusion, though the young people have to depend upon the used outfits for their survival due to financial woes, this culture has brought the invasive carbon level under absolute control which would be beneficial for humankind in long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30921052632 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77137438653 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2968323561 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110814682457 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359586851651 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399124849415 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621573881495 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263967531693 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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