You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inquire about a job of receptionist in your museum.
I saw this job vacancy last Saturday in the employment section of 'New York Times', thus I am applying for this job.
Currently, I am pursuing a graduation on glorious history of the U.S.A at the university of Texas.
Since I worked in the National Museum for six months, therefore I am armed with vast experience to tackle the potential clients and keep
the ancient items such as artefacts, antique furniture and so on with proper care. Seemingly I have completed a short course in
the management of museums, which I would think be conductive in putting die-hards efforts to manage your shop well.
This job acquaint me with the pragmatic working conditions and uplift the bar of knowledge which paves the path of a golden
career ahead. As I aspire to do a post graduation on American history, so this working experience would equip me with versatile
competencies which would be helpful in achieving the academic goals.
I am anticipating a positive and prompt reply from your side.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ohn, dweller of Huston Street Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inquire a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...aduation on glorious history of the U.S.A at the university of Texas. Since ...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...aduation on glorious history of the U.S.A at the university of Texas. Since ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or six months, therefore I am armed with vast experience to tackle the potential ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom your side. Yours Sincerely, John
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98492462312 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74440877067 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.938664887 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158650166804 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600687818004 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385164186411 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551950202464 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047056194046 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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