You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.
However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Road Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint regarding missing of my credit card . I am one of those loyal customers of your bank who are associated with you since the inception of your bank, but I have not seen such reckless service in my whole tenure. Sadly, I received a envelope yesterday
regarding the allotment of my new credit card, however the card was not placed inside.
Even though I have filled the complaint to customer care services, still I am nervous about the misutilization of my card. Thus,I request you to kindly block my card immediately and inform me.
Further, it would be highly appreciable if you trace out the persons who are behind such negligence. Please apprise me with your further strategies to find the missing card and penalize the accused person. I have enclosed the all details regarding my saving bank account maintain with your bank.
I am anticipating a prompt action on the above cited matter.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... John, dweller of Huston Road Texas U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a c...
^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...odge a complaint regarding missing of my credit card . I am one of those loyal cu...
^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...int regarding missing of my credit card . I am one of those loyal customers of yo...
^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e in my whole tenure. Sadly, I received a envelope yesterday regarding the allo...
^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Sadly, I received a envelope yesterday regarding the allotment of my new credit...
^^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tment of my new credit card, however the card was not placed inside. Even though...
^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...bout the misutilization of my card. Thus,I request you to kindly block my card imm...
^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ited matter. Yours sincerely, John
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61054062567 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2298472647 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272186456183 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103516090608 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633822415429 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135210272322 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741581937906 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.