You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in a great health. I am writing to express my disappointment for the service of your bank.
I am a new account holder of your bank and I created new account as I have heard of good reviews about the bank's service. I receievd a letter stating an enclosed new debit card, but I did not find the card, when I opened the envolope.
I am worried for the missing card .It might have gone in the wrong hands making me vulnerable. If it is not the case, I am already anxious about the service as this is my first impression of your bank.
However, I request you to first investigate the issue and make up to the loss done or else, I will close my bank account and withdraw my funds and go to the other bank.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Hema
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ntment for the service of your bank. I am a new account holder of your bank an...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f good reviews about the banks service. I receievd a letter stating an enclosed n...
^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n enclosed new debit card, but I did not find the card, when I opened the envolo...
^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ebit card, but I did not find the card, when I opened the envolope. I am worr...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e card, when I opened the envolope. I am worried for the missing card .It mig...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...d, when I opened the envolope. I am worried for the missing card .It might have gone in...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pe. I am worried for the missing card .It might have gone in the wrong hands ma...
^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
.... I am worried for the missing card .It might have gone in the wrong hands maki...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34567901235 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47511621431 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0908153701 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398604658436 0.216113520407 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142357991897 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427126531836 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188709531449 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067542412546 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.