Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to request you to organize a program in which I can act as a volunteer. As I recently completed my studies, thus this volunteer program would be conductive for me in getting practical exposure.
I have recently completed my graduation from British Medical Association and qualified as a Cardiologist. I well versed with skills to handle those patients who are suffering from chronic cardiovascular diseases. Although I have attended an internship just for six months in MAX Hospital, in order to enhance my practical experience I want to work as a volunteer.
I would prefer to work as volunteer in India which is one of the emerging nations. As the number of heart patients are burgeoning at alarming rate, so being a cardiologist I would serve society there. It would be highly appreciable if you would draft an expedition program for six months only.
I am anticipating a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
JOhn
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-24 | cpanavdeeppuri@gmail.com | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to request y...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er program would be conductive for me in getting practical exposure. I have r...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02298850575 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01541816836 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0571552838 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180455662695 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652805748372 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407054783265 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827756844357 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362694612312 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.