You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your hotel because of its poor hospitality services during the last weekend of my stay.
I came to Las Vegas on a vacation, and it was my second trip to the city. I booked a room at your Crown Plaza Hotel for two nights. Unfortunately, the weather was unpleasant and not usual at the time of my visit. I could not enjoy my stay at your hotel. The reason behind my vacation got spoiled because I got sicked due to your centralized A/C system which was not functional during my entire stay.
In the morning, the day was hot and I was feeling warm. Since the A/C of my room was not working, I had to open up the windows all day, and in the night, the windows remained open and it was raining outside, Due to the undisturbing weather, I could fix the comfortable temperature of the room according to my body. However, I overcome the problem by going to another hotel for the next night. I got some sleep, but I did not get enough time to enjoy the holiday because of your actions.
Therefore, I urge you to please refund the amount of my second night stay at your hotel or else provide me a good discount on my next visit to your hotel if I want to go anywhere around the country because Crown Plaza has multiple hotels across the globe. It would be best to give your hotel a second chance, but I hope you will not disappoint me on my next vacation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and it was my second trip to the city. I booked a room at your Crown Plaza Hotel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39929328622 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50615494253 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3969930196 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275563751539 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104763159339 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048194155735 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14849216659 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619493410855 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.