You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include:
Details about the conference
Why you want your colleague to give the presentation
What arrangement you will do for this conference
Dear Mr. Jones,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. As you know, we have a conference on coming next week for some people who would like to invest in our new product. However, I would not be able to come because the general manager of Pfizer company wants to speak with us regarding new innovations in our IT infrastructure environment.
Pfizer is one of the biggest clients of our firm. So, I need to attend the meeting on an urgent basis on the same day as our conference meeting with new partners. The business conference will take on next Thursday around 11 am to 4 pm at the Plaza Hotel. You can connect with the reception desk of the hotel to get the details of the conference room. Plus, check with the lunch menu as we have organized a lunch too in this business conference.
Besides, I choose you for giving the presentation because of your effective communication skills and interaction with a huge audience that you have been serving for a decade with our firm to our European clients. And, I know you will be rock solid to present the valuable ideas since you are an asset to our firm.
Moreover, you do not need to be tensed about the equipment required for the presentation like mike, speakers, audio-video setup as it will be all prepared by the Hotel. Like I said earlier, call the reception desk and they will update you with all the details. The hotel Reception desk number is 01019278327. If there is anything you need, please reach me out on my mobile before Thursday and get this meeting line up in your business calendar. I will take you out to drinks on Friday for helping me out into this stuck-up situation.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 937.175257732 158% => OK
No of words: 320.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.621875 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59321342341 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2320430255 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282998293588 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856799737956 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547728324922 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137508803658 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480263462039 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.