You recently stayed at a hotel. While coming back from the hotel, you discovered that you have left an item of clothing there. Write a letter to the manager. In that letter:
- Describe the item.
- Specify where he can find it.
- What you like him to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is pooja arora and I was staying in room number 205 in your hotel for the past two weeks. I am writing this letter about a piece of clothing which I accidentally left there. I hope you will consider my request favorably.
Let me explain my situation. I checked out of my room yesterday and after I reached home, I realized that my favorite T-shirt, which I received as a birthday gift, is missing. The T-Shirt is a Medium Sized Gap brand and it is in black color with the words "Always Hungry" written on the front side in bold white letters. As far as I recall, I forgot to pick it up when I went to refresh just before departing. it should be behind the door in the restroom.
would you please check the room to see if the T-Shirt is there. Once found, i would really appreciate if you can ship it to my residential address mentioned below.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
pooja arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, my name is pooja arora and I was staying...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...othing which I accidentally left there. I hope you will consider my request favo...
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Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... went to refresh just before departing. it should be behind the door in the restro...
^^
Line 9, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be behind the door in the restroom. would you please check the room to see i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...ehind the door in the restroom. would you please check the room to see if the...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 77, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ee if the T-Shirt is there. Once found, i would really appreciate if you can ship...
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Line 21, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r consideration. Yours faithfully, pooja arora
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65317919075 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68838953103 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2696371196 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160243947299 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587827846366 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631881309346 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12213612188 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724600096803 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.