Dear Mr,
I am Thomas Mark one of your part-time employees. I have started working in the designing department as mechanical engineer for two week. . I am writing this letter with regard to the problem that I have encountered in the company.
I am really fond of computer aided design. Designing industrial products is my dominant skill. As a master student in mechanical engineering, this part time job would be a precious opportunity for me regarding illustration of my ability and flourishing in my beloved major. On the other hand, the salary level is indeed satisfactory even though it is not a full-time work.
Everything was going on in the company until recent weeks. Unfortunately, some of my colleagues tend to set me up in the light of the fact that they are jealous of my ambition and success. Hence, they do not intend to have efficient collaboration with me in order to handling the agendas. As a matter of the fact, it would inevitably contribute to detrimental effect on the projects.
I would appreciate if you take effective action in case of informing them. Not only would they cause defects in their performance, but it would lead to delay in handling tasks. Thus, it would be wise if you warn them for this inconvenience.
I am looking forward to hearing from you in your earliest.
Yours sincerely
Thomas Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr, I am Thomas Mark one of your part-time e...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...partment as mechanical engineer for two week. . I am writing this letter with regard...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nt as mechanical engineer for two week. . I am writing this letter with regard to...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as mechanical engineer for two week. . I am writing this letter with regard to t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t I have encountered in the company. I am really fond of computer aided design...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...student in mechanical engineering, this part time job would be a precious opportunity for...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you in your earliest. Yours sincerely Thomas Mark
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Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iest. Yours sincerely Thomas Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, thus, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88260869565 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94863354104 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621739130435 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1060892154 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1875 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189937389178 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532372692024 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498149027726 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983758613247 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532103262025 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.