You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.
say how you feel about his/her performance
give details of your music-related activities
explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr. Smith,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, a resident of Patiala, Punjab. I recently attended your concert in my town which was held in Hockey Stadium, and through this letter, I would like to take some tips to improve my own singing.
I pleased with your performance, and I also dreamed about it that one day I could be known as the greatest singer in Indian. Your voice is similar to the nightingale which can easily mesmerize anyone. Along with this, you have enormous wisdom of musical chords.
I was taking the music classes since I was four years old. Now, I have a good knowledge of music, and also I can play drum and flute. Unfortunately, I cannot control my breath when I perform at the stage.
Still, I have some doubts in mind, I want to take your advice on how I can improve my voice, and clear it. Besides this, I just want to know how you could control your breath while you dance with singing. could you help me with this matter?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68062827225 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36111142912 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1692274973 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263160670549 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881066463218 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744518387301 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116965319 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858970161887 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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