You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
• Say how you feel about his performance
• Give details of your musical activities
• Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Antony,
I am writing in connection to your last concert that took place at the Lavilla banquet hall, downtown city centre last weekend. It has always been a dream growing up to take part in your life concert, which I finally did this weekend, and you were wonderful, magnificent throughout the evening, your new Album was mind-blowing.
Growing up, I will ask my parents for a new MP3 just to upload all your new and old album. Moreover, when I became a corporate worker, I bought my first piano to play all your lyrics. I have a great aspiration in music and will be a dream come through if I become a pop star like you. I really do need a mentor and it will be my honour if you can assist me or put me through music because I will love to be you.
I will like to hear from you soon.
Best Regards,
Nelson Obina
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| 2023-02-11 | ielts_tony | 87 | view |
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| 2021-12-10 | RamInd | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to take part in your life concert, which I finally did this weekend, and you were...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h music because I will love to be you. I will like to hear from you soon. Best ...
^
Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...music because I will love to be you. I will like to hear from you soon. Best Regar...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23417721519 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36675859068 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664556962025 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.670556291 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20050196154 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817899171386 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549912675595 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142669862773 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00262313610793 0.0580467560999 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.