Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well. Since we haven’t planned any meetups for the past two months, I want you to come to the Sunburn music festival that is ongoing in our town at Indira Gandhi Stadium. However, I’ve been there with my colleagues on the first day, and the opening ceremony was amazing.
Since you know this is one of the biggest music festivals around the world which will be going to end on coming Sunday. Dmitri Vegas, Like Mike, David Guetta, and Coldplay will be showing performances on Saturday.
I have already booked the tickets in advance for the Saturday show. Besides, David Guetta and Like mike is one of your all-time favorite singers. So, it would be great fun if you come along to enjoy this music fest. Moreover, I’ve bought the tickets for the Class-A section that is just next to the stage which includes complimentary snacks and drinks on the house. Finally, after the music concert, the staff has organized a private party for Section-A guests with all the singers. This would be a dream come true for both of us to meet our favorite rockstars. You won't be having second thoughts about not coming to the music fest on Saturday.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15468996641 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639269406393 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 219.0 16.3608247423 1339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1008.0 76.5299724578 1317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 219.0 16.8248392259 1302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 80.0 4.34317383033 1842% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147287047498 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147287047498 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848138196497 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225738679658 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 109.7 8.37731958763 1309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -133.89 70.7449484536 -189% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.3 7.45979381443 1157% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.74 7.59969072165 233% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 89.6 8.54432989691 1049% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 90.0 8.15463917526 1104% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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