You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.
Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
• Ask for some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Chi Chung – a recently your company customer who have rented an automobile that is identified with ID number FD342945. Regarding to this fact that I’m new to this town and I preferred to visit all the spots by own car, While I have read all the information surround this automobile’s GPS which was gathered in your agency catalog Thus far, this vehicle had a serious gps problem that made an inconvenience situation for me and affected all my trip aspects. Since I rented this car on your representative catalog , I feel that I am entitled to request a full refund. I can be contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your Faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Chi C...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Chi Chung – a recently your c...
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... this car on your representative catalog , I feel that I am entitled to request a ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this matter is greatly appreciated. Your Faithfully, Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 625.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8828125 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99041997417 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7109375 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.103416791 44.8134815571 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102143516965 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635538734034 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376836197114 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892176326387 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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