You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event.
Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter:
Explain why you are interested in helping.
Give details suitable past experience.
Suggest ways you might help with the event.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your newspaper advertisement for volunteers, I am interested to volunteer for this event.
My name is Rebecca Jonhson, I am an event manager and work for a leading company of event management. I Like to do charity work usually on the weekend and really got interested in this event as it is related to my profession and it is the best opportunity for me to give back to my community through my expertise.
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Furthermore, I have arranged a lot of events similar to this event. I am specialized in designing the stage and maintenance of stage equipment. Last year we arranged for a big music feast for around five thousand people, it was a real success.
I can also help in catering and sitting arrangement as I have many contacts through my work, Moreover, I can ask them for discounts as this is for charity, many of my friends would also like to join and contribute towards our community.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Rebecca Johnson.
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...k to my community through my expertise. . Furthermore, I have arranged a lot of ...
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...housand people, it was a real success. I can also help in catering and sitting...
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...many contacts through my work, Moreover, I can ask them for discounts as this is...
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...y contacts through my work, Moreover, I can ask them for discounts as this is fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83240223464 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91743905117 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6161266723 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166496112402 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639806693088 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466284638567 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906066031308 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546321316769 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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