Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards with the product that I purchased from your store last week and i am really disappointed with the quality and the performance of the product.
I purchased a Whirlpool Washing machine with water
heating technology that was continuously being advertised on television from past few months. However, this in-built technology do not work the way it is getting advertise.
The ad of Whirlpool Washer machine states that the water is heated up to 65 degree centigrade. And, this temperature will help to kill all the germs and give you a germ-free wash. But this is not the case. Yesterday when I started the machine and turned it to germ free mode, the water failed to reach the mentioned temperature in the advertisement. Instead, it barely reach a temperature of 25 degrees. I do not expect such quality of products from such a big brand.
So, I would like to know if it this problem is specific to this single unit or not. If so, then I request you to change this product and suggest similar product of different brand. As i am looking for a product with a Germ free wash system.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Thank you
Yours Sincerely
Jayraj Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70979789431 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1186364435 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8571428571 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14839949906 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444301413997 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468361442506 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624096310454 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413721914868 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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