Many people are working really hard to earn a living, which makes it difficult for them to have a balance between professional and personal life. And only some people are able to manage both. A possible reason for such situation could be work overload resulting into increase in working hours. In order to combat this problem definitive steps by the company like limiting working hours and increasing man power can help to curb the situation.
Working till late hours has become a new norm. This is because of an excessive work load that makes an employee to work for more hours than required. Also, sometimes a worker works for an extra hour in order to get promotion. As, it is known that to survive in today's tough competitive world, one has to prove their dedication to work which can be achieved by adding additional work hours. A survey by Times Job stated that majority of employees that put in extra effort at workplace have higher chances of getting a promotion as compared to others.
One of the best solution to manage this situation is to have a law of strict working hours for everyone. Government can pass such an act of 8 working hours rule and make companies to follow it. Also, company can increase the man power, so that their employees are not over burdened with the work. This can solve the problem easily, as the work will be shared among the individuals and this would result in timely completion of the given task.
In conclusion, managing a work life balance is really important for every individual to have a stress free life. Majority of people cannot achieve this balance due to over burden of work and their greed for promotion. However, government can come help to overcome the situation by passing a law of limited working hours .
- Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- News stories on TV and in newspaper are often accompanied by pictures Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 73
- now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face it is a positive or a negative development 84
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 73
- News Media is more influential nowadays and some people think it is a negative development to what extent do you agree or disagree
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y passing a law of limited working hours .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73139158576 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45241073605 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8637974839 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208102286043 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774620685267 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633354619015 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147618427271 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056273804185 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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