You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to the advertisement of a tennis course which will start next week in Liverpool.
This course is of great interest to me as it will give me an opportunity to improve my skills as an amateur tennis player. Even though I am always trying to excel at this sport, the lack of proper guidance has always hindered my progress.
Although, I want to complete the entire course, there is a major issue of my internship. It will start in two months time and I have to move to London for the period of three months. As a result, I would not be able to continue the training.
I would like to know about your refund policy in this case. I can provide you the offer letter from my company if it is a requirement. As I will not be attending the course for last two months, a partial refund can also be acceptable to me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Chris Lee
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| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-06 | Faisal Mushtaq | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-23 | eesha | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36206896552 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48805443068 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7165123709 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23181501518 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752536029642 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473767387931 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102872692101 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523081209436 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.