You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.
Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.
Dear Sir,
I am 1st year student of medical course and residing in university hostel, room no: 112. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction over my roommate behavior.
I share my room with another student named Becky who is pursuing bachelor in Arts. Most of the time, her friends come to room for party and play loud music which cause lots of disturbance in my study. Moreover, she never informs me about her plan and uses my belongings without my permission. I tried to explain my points to her about being responsible but she did not pay any attention and rudely declined to do any cooperation.
Since I am medical student and needs to devote lots of time in study as round the year course exam and presentations keep going. I am requesting you to allot me another room possibly single occupancy and for immediate resolution, please talk to Becky and make her understand about room discipline. I may be contacted after my daily class end i.e. 5:00 pm onward, in case you require more information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you about solution.
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am 1st year student of medical course ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urse exam and presentations keep going. I am requesting you to allot me another ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in case you require more information. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74479166667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72175659903 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5583168934 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222533602611 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826028883234 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506701864203 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116906853822 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216477883547 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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