As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People often talk that world has become a global village where people travel to different location with ease and communicate smoothly. Owing to this, people feel that different cultures are losing their originality and identity. I believe that globalization is definitely impacting the native cultures; however, people would still be able to maintain their basic values and traditions.
People who consider that due to globalization, culture will lose its uniqueness have different reasons. Firstly, there has been tremendous improvement in communication medium and people access the information worldwide at their finger. Thus, everybody is aware about the other’s traditions and styles and this make the world more or less similar. For example, nowadays my wife watch the Australia chef T.V program and try to cook different dishes which are only cooked in Australian society. Secondly, mass numbers of people travel from one part of another and share their experiences with different individuals. As a result, people learn new habit such as ascent, manner, moral values which were only known by the set of people belong to particular society or community in the past. Finally, people love to learn new things and adopt in their life style. Nowadays, people try different attires as a fashion. Particularly youth get influenced by modern patterns and styles and wear them at different occasions.
Despite of this, people stick to native culture because of their affection, pride, values and so more. People feel pride when they are associated with their native culture. For instance, Edinburgh is one of the globalized cites in the world but native people still wear their native styles at wedding, important events, there by showing their strong affinity with original culture. Furthermore, everyone understands that culture and identities are tightly linked and most of the time, it is connected to nation identity also. National anthem in the native language for example exhibits their pride towards their native culture and identity.
In conclusion, globalization is definitely casting the influence on verities of world’s culture but people love their identities, language, values by heart and these will not wipe out due to globalization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44034090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71701283914 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2245978864 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.388888889 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157253083218 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566898415114 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370685610686 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108359624391 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020590238118 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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