You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.
Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter about my dissatisfaction with my roommate.
I am student of 2nd semester of MBA. My Room mate (Rita) is student of 1st semester MBA always makes lot of noise and she always has parties with their friends. She listen to rock music at mid night and switch on radio very loudly. Earlier she used to hand-out but eventually she started drinking also. The environment of room is very disturbing and uncomfortable. Last week, I Complained about all these things but you suggested me to avoid all these things.
I reminded her so many tomes but she does not change her behavior anymore. So I would be grateful of you change my room.

Yours sincerely
TT

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter about my dissat...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing this letter about my dissatisfaction with my roommate. I am student of 2nd s...
^^
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'listens'.
Suggestion: listens
...ays has parties with their friends. She listen to rock music at mid night and switch o...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...out but eventually she started drinking also. The environment of room is very distur...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 570.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 122.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63689938693 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696721311475 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5588865329 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249303229885 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827016744157 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425740709451 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135297562796 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541759675095 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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