You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Respected Mr. Watson,
This letter regards the request for the admission of my son in your reputed school St. Johannes for year 11 for next term, as my family and I are relocating to Delhi next month.
After extensive research, we have settled down for some of the reputed schools where St. Johannes topping the list considering the vast range of subjects, teaching tools, and aids and experienced teaching staff. Here, we would really wonder would you be kind enough to take my son's admission for next term?
My son has not only always been a top student in all his primary and secondary years but also excelled in the sports of Basketball as well as cricket. Moreover, He has also represented the school 3 times at the state level for debate competition and won 2 of them. He has been quite a bright student garnering praises from his friends and Teachers alike. His interests lie in Science and sports alike and would want to persue in both of them.
Lastly, I would really hope that you would ponder over all his laurels and achievements and consider him for your reputed school.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sive research, we have settled down for some of the reputed schools where St. Johannes topp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, moreover, really, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41956721289 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3720607266 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144182970438 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619267063733 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416639142002 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733578583113 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508916811672 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.