You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear………………………
You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
• explain the situation and why you cannot continue the course
• say what you would like to do about your studies
• ask for advice about what you can do about the situation
Dear Ms. Smith
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. My name is Mark James and I had enrolled for commercial modelling and financial analysis class in the evening at your institute.
To elucidate the situation I had joined this course to gain insights into the commercial aspects of the business transactions which I face regularly in the present role of Sales specialist but unfortunately, my reporting manager has resigned and I have been given more responsibility of some overseas projects. Earlier it was easier for me to attend the evening course but due to the present situation work pressure will increase as the additional projects which are assigned to me will involve intense travelling for a couple of months till my employer finds a suitable replacement for my manager hence I would not be able to continue the course for now.
Thus keeping the current situation in mind I would suggest you allow me to continue this course in the new batch starting next summer as I would like to finish the course so that it helps in understanding the business transactions easily.
I would also request you to give some valuable suggestion considering the complexity of the present situation.
I look forward to your immediate response and guidance.
Yours Sincerely
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. My name is Mark...
^^^
Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...situation work pressure will increase as the additional projects which are assign...
^^
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he complexity of the present situation. I look forward to your immediate respons...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response and guidance. Yours Sincerely Mark
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05238095238 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87037017531 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.118584482 44.8134815571 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.625 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182445934219 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089776077144 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695044061262 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101436923977 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560347167529 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.