You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord . In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
..........
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have rented out one of your apartments in the Lake Vista community. I am new to the city and moved in last week. I am staying with my family in a studio, on 4th floor apartment number 4011. Although the apartment is spacious, I am facing issues with the furniture in the apartment.
Let me explain you my situation in detail, one of the screw of the dinning table chair is missing. If a person sits on the chair by mistake he might fall down, due to this I have kept the chair in the storage. Another problem I am facing is that the washing machine is not working. Its not working from day one and I have a pile of clothes that need to be washed, this might have to be taken care as soon as possible. I have raised the complain with the community manager as well and as per his suggestion I am writing to you as well.
Would you kindly look into this problem as soon as possible ? I would request you to put washing machine related issue on high priority, I am okay with getting washing machine repaired or replacing it completely. Chair can be repaired in 2-3 weeks as this is not urgent and meanwhile I can use other chairs. I hope you would consider my request carefully and try to resolve my problem as soon as possible.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Tejpal Yadav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...new to the city and moved in last week. I am staying with my family in a studio, ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...care as soon as possible. I have raised the complain with the community manager as well and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33984375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44354259061 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1226422696 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202257255406 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763753123586 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736731662755 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150360940891 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696061352876 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.